Another stab at comic book magnum opus

Seeing as some are intrigued about it, here's another 19 pages worth of forgotten ambitions I once had.

My attempt at a "manga"...

Haven't done much in a while after my last scanner called it quits, but now that I have another one, I figured I better do something about it so here you go. A decade or so back when I was still in that naive, weeaboo phase of my life, I attempted a Japanese-style comic of my own but couldn't get past a 3-page teaser seen below. Tell me what you think!